Revised Risky Buisness

Thesis Statement:
The consequences to rave & clubbing are always negative.

CON:
The consequences to raves & clubbing aren't always negative because you can make friends, learn different types of dancing, and express yourself.


PRO(s):
The negative consequences over weigh the benefits of raving & clubbing because it has many long term effects such as drug and alcohol abuse, jail time, and even death.

Raves and clubs are unisex. Males and females can enter. By this happening, it causes sexually and attractive activity. The consequence to that is a female getting pregnant. It's a big consequence and responsibility if a female gets pregnant because she is now liable for the infant.